Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has created a single world.
Technology has a tremendous impact on our world. In fact, the progress that our world reach is directly associated with the level of the technology we get. Therefore, I adamantly agree that technology is creating a single world culture for many important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
The main reason is that with the high modern innovations and technology facilitates to all the countries to easily get in touch with each other. My friend's experience is a compelling example of what I mean. I have a friend live in Egypt and his brother lives in Canada and with the advanced technology in the field of communication he bought a cell phone to call his brother through some applications for free and also he can see him through the internet. In addition, my friend brought a device and this device work as a 3D device. So, he can see his brother and set down with of him. There is no doubt that my friend would not have had the opportunity to call or see his brother if there were not modern devices with high level of technology allow him to do that.
Another reason is that with the modern technology we can broaden our knowledge about different cultures and recognise many customs and traditions for different countries. there is a study accentuated that the internet has a significant influence on our world to be specific, you can watch some youtube and read some articles and these kinds of information will provide you with a variety of knowledge and experience about different countries. Moreover, this study substantiated that the more technology the world reach the more the world gets closer. Furthermore, the entrepreneurs begin to consolidate their endeavours to make the world one area by introducing more highly innovations like the field of airplanes. now you can ride a plane with high speed and visit your friends or your family or to visit a new place and back again. These examples demonstrate that the technology has an immeasurable effect on our world and unify the world into one area even if the world has a variety of cultures or customs
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly support my opinion that is simply because the modern technology facilitate the communications between the countries and also because it helps us to recognize different cultures and traditions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90355329949 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85790408503 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482233502538 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6538120581 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288412905289 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980554545691 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699648031237 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167822979392 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112308959251 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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