Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Everyone knows that the media plays a crucial role in our lives in these days, whether it is television, newspaper, magazines and other social media. Furthermore, they all cover the situations which happen around the world. I disagree with the statement that television, newspaper, magazines and other social media spend too much time in covering the personal life of popular people like public figures and celebrities because they actually pay too much attention to poor people life’s and they spread knowledge and awareness around the world.
First of all, social media cover the problem of low-class people. For example, when I was at school, I read a story about a homeless person who needed money and home. I talked with my teacher and classmates about it and we decided to help him, then we collected money from the whole school for him. In addition to that last year I watched the story of a girl in CNN TV who was struggling with blood cancer and her family did not have enough money for her treatment because blood cancer patient's blood must be replaced with new and fresh blood every year. Then a bank account was opened for denoting money for this patient and it really helps her.
Secondly, Television, newspaper, and magazines can be used as a platform to spread knowledge and awareness among people. Furthermore, national geographic TV and other educational TVs can help students to increase their knowledge. for instance, when I was a student in high school, our geographic teacher and we were watching national geographic because it was the best way to learn more about geographic and other natural objects. Moreover, I used to read about the latest discovery in technology in the science magazines during my studying at the university.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay more attention to the problem of poor people and serve as a source for spreading knowledge and aware-nesses about other important things in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...p students to increase their knowledge. for instance, when I was a student in high ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03614457831 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68639578449 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524096385542 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5916309822 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.615384615 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 5.45110844103 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185906171885 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611014382015 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799669190306 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128007639449 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896365883453 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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