do you agree or disagree with the following statement? television advertising directed towards young children should not be allowed .
Today’s world is made out of technology and we know that television is one of those most efficient technology that we are using these days furthermore, we may like it or not TV cause good or bad effects on our lives and tv advertisement might be one of them which almost many people don’t like it, because companies which made this advertisements doesn’t care about anything but selling their products. Maybe the product that it has been advertised is not qualified or interesting as they are presenting it. Besides, advertisements would cause negative effects on people behavior and more importantly on children’s. Hence, I agree that television advertising directed towards young children should not be allowed and now I’m going to explain the reasons.
First of all, picture a kid who is watching an advertisement in TV of a new toy or a beautiful Barbie doll which is just came out and it’s totally interesting! You can guess what comes next? The kid is starting to insist to her/his parents to buy the toy for him/her! One of the problems that we are going to face here is that maybe the parents can’t afford the price to buy the toy because of some financial problems they have but, they don’t want to break their beloved child’s hearts so they will buy it even though it is not a good choice to buy a new expensive toy when they have bills to pay.
Second, the advertisement may cause harmful and dangerous effect on children behavior. As an example, will mention my friend’s daughter reaction to one of the advertisement. She was watching an advertisement of a new toy which was speaking to the kid in advertisement after watching that she went to her room started speaking with one of her dolls. After a while she came to her mother and said: why my doll isn’t talking and started crying and yelling that I want one of those dolls in TV which Can speaks to me! This is an awful
Effect on a child behavior and mind.
Third, this advertisements may ruin children creativity and activity too. Because whole day they are dreaming about the toy in advertisement so they can’t concentrate in other stuff moreover they don’t even play.
To sum up, I believe that this advertisements should be stopped by the governments and if it doesn’t stop parents should be cautious about what their children is watching on TV.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, while, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85574572127 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97038142514 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503667481663 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.224676411 48.9658058833 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.769230769 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4615384615 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170155812047 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874139581029 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116061212668 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884143180672 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776206232165 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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