Recently, many people have raised a topic about whether children nowadays have enough free time. Someone says that children spend most of their time on doing homework or participating in organized activities while others think children have too much free time. In my opinion, I disagree that children should be given more free time to do whatever they want.
To begin with, giving children too much free time harms their health, particularly their eyesight, and this is because they lack self-control. If children retain a great deal of personal autonomy over whatever they like to do, they are very likely to focus on their smart phones for games. For example my younger brother, who is grade 7, doesn’t have too much homework. Every time he finishes his homework, he will play video games on his phone with his friends, which makes his near-sighted problems increase by 50° in one summer holiday.
In addition, giving children too much free time also makes them fatter. Most people nowadays are lazy; instead, they like to stay at home on holidays with no exercise at all. For example, my younger brother put on his weight during his transition from the elementary school to secondary school. He didn’t do any sport during that summer holiday. He was 50 kg before, but he turned to 60 kg after the break. When he went back to school, half of his classmates got fat. Therefore, I think giving children too much free time are bad for them.
Last but not least, children with much free time might disturb others in many ways. For instance, I still remember the noise on the day when my brother brought his friends to my home. And they invited me to play mobile games with them. When I got a nice gun, they decided to blow me up with a grenade, which made me mad. Given this unpleasant experience, I think they need more homework to make sure they don’t make other feel bad.
In conclusion I think children should not have too much free time because it does not benefit them or other people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68465909091 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33718087659 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553977272727 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6212001525 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.45 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318527540902 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104524371463 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110782894022 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191520860616 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109330810603 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68465909091 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33718087659 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553977272727 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6212001525 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.45 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318527540902 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104524371463 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110782894022 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191520860616 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109330810603 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.