It is an interesting topic to discuss because it takes up a lot of room in our modern lives.
Some people agree that after 20 years there will be less cares while others oppose this claim.
In my point of view, I would disagree with the above-mentioned statement that after several years, people will reduce their using of cars.
I feel this way for several causes which I will explore in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, with the rapid of technology cars play a paramount role in busy employee's lives.
In the past, most people in developing nations engaged in agricultural labor near their homes.
In contrast, nowadays people are more likely to live in apartment buildings far from the businesses and industries where they work therefore each person own his car to drive to his workplace.
My own experience is a good example, my grandparents always used to work in farms where they can travel short distances on foot and stay close to their homes.
In contrast, my parents moved to a city last few years to work in a steel plant and drive almost thirty kilometers from our home to the plant every day.
In general, all co-workers do the same.
I can see no indication that this trend will halt in the future. In fact, it seems likely that even more people will experience this.
Secondly, incomes are rising all over the world, which means that in the future automobiles will be affordable for even more people not only that but also cars will be cheaper than they are in the past.
Owning a car in the past, was a privilege enjoyed only by those who were rich and lived in the developed world.
From what I have deliberated above, I reckon that in the future there will be more vehicles on the road than there are today.
This is due to the world is rapidly urbanizing and developing, and because rising wages will open up even more markets for automobile companies.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cares is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...agree that after 20 years there will be less cares while others oppose this claim. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i feel, i reckon, in contrast, in fact, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46789322096 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5448314241 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178560177786 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547214385827 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487290079656 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567414425753 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498260038099 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cares is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...agree that after 20 years there will be less cares while others oppose this claim. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i feel, i reckon, in contrast, in fact, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46789322096 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5448314241 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178560177786 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547214385827 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487290079656 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567414425753 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498260038099 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.