Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Today life is become too quick than it was in the past. So, everyone is want to reach upto their destination on time. That's why most of the people is useing car. Some people believe that numbers of car is gradually increase in this recent year then past 20 years. I agree with this statement. I have two reasons for that, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Today's generation is more used to the automobile than the our past generartion. peoples are become too much lazy .They do not want to walk even for the small distance. They all are purchasing new car to get upto their office. To illustrate this my own experience is enough. My cousin brother just get employment in the local chemical factory. He is used to eat the burger and other fast-food item. Because of that his body is too much fatty now a days. As a result of that he is too much lazy do not able to walk continuously for the 15 min. So, he recetly purchased one brand new four-wheeler car to rach up to the chemical industry. So, by that way now a days numbers of car is increasing rapidly.
Secondly, per capita income of the people is increased by many fold then the past people can got from their daily work. Also, the car is become the fashion icon and sign of wealthy people. So, more and more people is wanted to got new car. For example, my father is wored since the last 10 year in one firm. In the starting he got only 10,000 rupees salary on the monthly basis. At the present time due to his work sacrifice towards this firm, he got 70,000 rupees salary on the monthly basis. That was much more higher than his innitial paid. As result of this now my father have more liquid and on hand case than the past time. just becasue, of that my father recently booked out one brand new SUV car.
In conclusion, I am in the opinion that number of the car on the road was rapidly increased in just recent year. Because peoples are become too lazy now a day and becasue people having more accessibility to car than earliar time.
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- Directions You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage Typicall 3
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- Integrated essay 3
- TPO53 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...o reach upto their destination on time. Thats why most of the people is useing car. S...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...elieve that numbers of car is gradually increase in this recent year then past 20 years....
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...ion is more used to the automobile than the our past generartion. peoples are become to...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Peoples
...tomobile than the our past generartion. peoples are become too much lazy .They do not w...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...artion. peoples are become too much lazy .They do not want to walk even for the sm...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...tion. peoples are become too much lazy .They do not want to walk even for the small ...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent in the local chemical factory. He is used to eat the burger and other fast-fo...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to eating'.
Suggestion: used to eating
...t in the local chemical factory. He is used to eat the burger and other fast-food item. Be...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ause of that his body is too much fatty now a days. As a result of that he is too much laz...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... of that his body is too much fatty now a days. As a result of that he is too much laz...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... As a result of that he is too much lazy do not able to walk continuously for the...
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Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... the chemical industry. So, by that way now a days numbers of car is increasing rapidly. ...
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Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...hemical industry. So, by that way now a days numbers of car is increasing rapidly. ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir daily work. Also, the car is become the fashion icon and sign of wealthy peo...
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Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...ary on the monthly basis. That was much more higher than his innitial paid. As result of th...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...e more liquid and on hand case than the past time. just becasue, of that my father recent...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Just
...id and on hand case than the past time. just becasue, of that my father recently boo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... new SUV car. In conclusion, I am in the opinion that number of the car on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24173103889 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50656167979 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0770938277 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.1481481481 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.62962962963 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172672359405 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516274297703 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527046488389 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122884387753 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634809145169 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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