People will be using less cars two decades later from the present period. I believe that statement there are several reasons to agree to the statement .
To begin with, many years later there would be cheap and efficient energy saving public transportation implemented due to the technological advancements. For instance, there would be solar powered buses and metros that help their transportation at cheap rates. Subsequently, more people would be drawn to this scheme and slowly the cars will be dramatically reduced.
Additionally, the fuel will be more expensive due to the fact that the natural reserves are depleting. This will lead to the inflation of gas prices and people will find it difficult to run their engines. Consequently, common man will cease to use their vehicles for daily use. To illustrate, the petroleum fuel is depleting as such its price will go high. Eventually people will not fuel their engine as such less vehicles on ground.
Furthermore, as part of preventing air pollution the government will begin certain schemes to reduce the vehicles on road. As a part of it man will not be allowed to use their cars but they will be encouraged to use the public transportation services. This will also be another reason for comparatively lesser vehicles on the roads.
To conclude, slowly the number of cars will be reducing due to the alarming rate of air pollution. In order to control that as well as to persuade the people to use the public transportation there will be few number of vehicles two decades later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
People will be using less cars two decades later from the present...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...everal reasons to agree to the statement . To begin with, many years later there ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the cars will be dramatically reduced. Additionally, the fuel will be more expe...
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Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ople will not fuel their engine as such less vehicles on ground. Furthermore, as ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ratively lesser vehicles on the roads. To conclude, slowly the number of cars w...
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Line 8, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill be reducing due to the alarming rate of air pollution. In order to control th...
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Line 8, column 207, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...the public transportation there will be few number of vehicles two decades later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99227799228 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86262127983 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4736465129 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253851940832 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101515934795 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642703807226 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169905063744 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559144561066 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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