As the timeline changes people also do change.Its difficult to say that this world is been made up by our forefathers since there has been a massive change happening and is still undergoing. Transformation that made life easier,faster and more comfortable. As a result, as this generation has changed from our parents generation which is explained below.
Firstly, there has been a tremendous technological achievement which has made life move faster than before through the invent of electric cars. For instance, with the invent of electric cars it was possible to resolve the issue of lack of fuel. Consequently man has been able to travel with the help of electricity as a source of energy. In contrast, during our parents generation there was a problem of depletion of energy resources which is being tackled by this novel invention and as such the level of pollution was also reduced.
Secondly, the communication has also become easier among people. For example, with the extension of broadband connection phone calls through watsapp application has made life more happier than before. So, it is possible for the overseas relatives to contact their native residents and relatives through this application. Furthermore, even business establishments can make foreign connections easy. Nevertheless, counting back during the period of past generation this was hard and complicated.
Finally, entertainment has also been drastically changed. To illustrate,there are a lot of malls emerging now which holds cinema theater,fun activities and even food court. Therefore, people can enjoy these amenities at any moment in this present era. However, the situation was totally different when compared to our traditional period. Man did not have such facilities to enjoy.
In a nutshell,there has been countless way by which the world has changed since our parents generation. Each of them has its own benefits and I believe that its our parents who laid foundation to that development. For which i am truly gratefully because its the fruits of their hard work we enjoy at present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As the timeline changes people also do cha...
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Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
... timeline changes people also do change.Its difficult to say that this world is bee...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , faster
...ng. Transformation that made life easier,faster and more comfortable. As a result, as t...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...de life move faster than before through the invent of electric cars. For instance, with th...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nt of electric cars. For instance, with the invent of electric cars it was possible to res...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...e to resolve the issue of lack of fuel. Consequently man has been able to travel with the he...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...rough watsapp application has made life more happier than before. So, it is possible for the...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... been drastically changed. To illustrate,there are a lot of malls emerging now which h...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fun
... emerging now which holds cinema theater,fun activities and even food court. Therefo...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...h facilities to enjoy. In a nutshell,there has been countless way by which the wor...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...has its own benefits and I believe that its our parents who laid foundation to that...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...undation to that development. For which i am truly gratefully because its the fru...
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...For which i am truly gratefully because its the fruits of their hard work we enjoy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31117824773 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05148813704 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6384199988 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111858195185 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331002076631 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666225286517 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614842806216 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411241398877 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.