Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’ generation?
Upon the above question, different people have different opinions based on their emotions, cultures, nationalities and so forth. From my point of view, there are many differences between my generation and my parents’ generation and in the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, these days, people can communicate with their friends or relatives easily and in a more convenient way. They use various communication tools such as telephone, cell phone, email, etc. In contrast, the only available tool for communication in past decades was telephone. Additionally, we can easily get online and obtain necessary information in a few seconds. However our parents had to go outside and buy newspapers or magazines. Current students can attend online courses or classes and get knowledge without going to traditional classrooms.
In the second place, I think another major difference between my generation and past generations is in lifestyle. In the past decades, people had more free time and they could meet their friends or relatives frequently. Conversely, these days, people are really busy and they should work from early in the morning to late in the night to cover expenses. Furthermore, children behaved toward their parents respectfully in the past years but currently, they do not listen to their parents’ advice.
Last but not least, past generation were eating healthier foods. There were no fast foods restaurants so that the rate of dangerous ailments such as cancer and obesity was low. On the contrary, nowadays, people would like to eat junk foods and do other harmful activities like spending a lot of hours watching television or surfing the Internet.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that there are many differences between current generation and past generation like different life styles and accessing to communication tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, i think, in contrast, such as, first of all, on the contrary, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39672131148 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98601236098 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613114754098 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8112557238 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273103441308 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786522442728 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934574677797 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16317469229 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102606039847 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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