Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today?
Transportation is one of the convenient modes of conveyance for the public nowadays. People prefer both modes of transportation i.e. public and private. The use of public and private transport depends on the availability of the resources and affordability by different sections of society. However, private transport facilities like the car are preferably used by most of the class in the society. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. The three main reasons for this disagreement are discussed below.
Firstly, people nowadays prefer to travel based on the convenience. They usually prefer to visit nearby family or friends in private vehicles. They enjoy their private ride in cars with their family and feel safer traveling in the car. They can listen to music and have fun while traveling together. They can carry their eatables and prefer to stop wherever they like during the journey. Due to this reason, car usage is increasing daily.
Secondly, with convenience comes the advancement in technology. The automobile companies like Maruti, Ford, Hyundai, BMW, etc. nowadays are designing cars based on the comfort of the user. The making of the vehicle is designed in such a way that every section of society is attracted to their choice accordingly. For example, the younger generation is attracted to the sports car version and similarly the elders to features like average, fuel saver, seating capacity (SUV, XUVs etc). Hence, the technology will definitely advance from where it is today until the next twenty years which will attract more number of people from society to buy the cars.
Lastly, affordability is also one of the key criteria which the automobile industries are taking into consideration. In earlier times, buying a car was not every man/women cup of tea. Today with variation in designs, the price range is also set for every section of society. One can easily afford a car by taking loans which help those section of the society who cannot afford to buy a car previously. Monetary issues are now being taken into consideration so as to make the vehicle easily available for everybody.
In conclusion, because of the increase in technology and people looking for more comfort, I believe that the use of cars in the next twenty years will definitely be more than today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...oth modes of transportation i.e. public as well as private. The use of public and private ...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly and feel safer traveling in the car. They can listen to music and have fun, laugh...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fun, laughter while traveling together. They can carry their eatables and prefer to ...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...el saver, seating capacity SUV, XUVs etc.. Hence, the technology will definitely a...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...xt twenty years will definitely be more as compared to today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04736842105 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70671167446 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2224115019 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3913043478 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13043478261 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258319892537 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730558771311 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148335773413 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147111831156 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826329133565 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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