Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the most conspicuous trends in the 21st century is efficient and faster transportation so people always want to use vehicle which is save their time. They want to protect their environment also has less bad effect in their habitat. Personally I believe there will be fewer car in the future. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in the following essay. First of all, every one knows that time is precious. In modern days it becomes even more valuable due to the sophisticated and hectic life that people have, because time means to them as the money. Therefore, they want save their time as much as possible. It is natural for them always looking for the faster and more effective, but automobiles and roads have physical limits for going faster. You cannot go fast as you want not only because the cars cannot handle that also it is not safe . As a result next generation will replace car either with subway or even new high technology which is much more safer and more rapid than our cars. For instance, TESLA company five years ago started the project which produce new generation of new vehicle transportation it will be ten times quicker that our automobiles . That product completely different from that we used to that as car, so it will be destroy car usage. Secondly, air pollution is the major issue across the globe, and people worried about their physical health. Countries want to scale back their use of fossil fuels and start investing in renewable energy. Our cars lose their efficiency if we want to use renewable fuel because they did not design to use that. Therefore scientists working on different things for transportation which can be work more effective and produce less pollution than cars while using renewable energy. New eco-friendly vehicle must design to do the least possible damage to the environment because we need clean earth for our next generation. Already the new type of transportation begun their journey, vehicle which almost do not produce any pollution. There will be more of them in the near future. In conclusion I am of the opinion that there will be less car in the future. This because people try save their times instead of wasting that in the cars and traffic and because we need protect our self, offspring and the environments from contamination
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
... even new high technology which is much more safer and more rapid than our cars. For insta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...five years ago started the project which produce new generation of new vehicle tr...
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Suggestion: .
...e ten times quicker that our automobiles . That product completely different from ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ecause they did not design to use that. Therefore scientists working on different things ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78304239401 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56317334213 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508728179551 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5034642005 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18496749634 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634388080096 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059593689407 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18496749634 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.