Each year the university has to take some major decisions about how it's funding should be distributed. Personally, I believe that sports activity has same importance as the libraries in a University. So i agree that universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activity as they give to their university library. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following eassay.
First of all, not every student is a scholar, that means everyone has a hobby and not everyone likes studying. There are some students who prefer sports over studies and they even excell in the sports. Because of such students the University should spend equal amount of money to build up good play-grounds, hire good sports coach and spend on other such activities. Nowadays most of the schools and colleges have a sports quota for admissions as well. Students who are excellent at their game can get admissions on the sports quota even if they have a low academic record. My friends personal experience is a compelling example of this. From the very beginning of the college, he had realized that he was not good at studies, so he used to bunk classes and go to the basketball court to practice his favorite sport. By the end of the year, he was taken on the College's basketball team because of his excellent performance in the Inter-college match. His parents were always worried that he would never be able to get into a god University for post graduation, However, due to his outstanding record in sports, he got admission in one of the top University for management.
Secondly, currently every University has to take care of their global ranking, the better the ranking, more students will be attracted towards the college. Although, there are many aspects on which these rankings depend, sports is one of those aspects. The university is judged based on the number of sports activities held by a college and also the number of players that are good at sports from the university. Due to this reason also i believe that University should spend same money as they spend on the libraries to promote more and more sports activities and players.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that sports activities being as important as studies, should get the same funding as does the university's libraries.
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In this competitive era, an…
In this competitive era, an educational play part and partial role in individual's life. A modern student is pretty aware about from where should he supposed to do his academic course. This is because a good institute would open many doors for youth to do well in future. Public speaking is highest demanded skill nowadays to do job at reputed company. In my opinion a university should give a provision to this facility so that every student can improve his skill. I feel this way for two reason, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the most cardinal reason behind this is the overpopulation which led to competition among employ. To beat this competition, of course, the candidate which have high and extra skill will get preference. And that is why a person which have better ability to speak in public will obviously get offer first. My own experience is the evidence of this. During my high school program i was shy in nature. talked to my peers as well as teachers in a limit. That is why i was not so familiar among school children as well as staff members. But in university campus, I used to have a healthy group discussion in classroom because of my history professor. I was quite frank with other faculty members and that is why one of my faculty member noticed me while i was leading a science project and he was very impressed form my anchoring. One day the professor invited me for a talk on a seminar on health issues. It was proud moment for me. That is why i felt public speaking is a part of our education and will definetely provide us an opportunity.
Secondly, everyone have right to put his thought and view on an agenda and to put your views in an effective way so that everyone love to listen you,you must be a good speaker. This quality of a good speaker would dafenitely came through experience. Thanks to my campus provide me such an opportunity to speak out so that i am good speaker now. I remember the day when one of my faculty member gave me a task to organise fresher party and welcome to vip guests. I did a lot of ractise in front of my classmates before the task. Finally in the end of party everyone was praising me for excellent anchoring.
In conclusion, public speaking is essential part in today's life because it provide a better job opportunity and speaking is the way for a person to put his views in front of public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84461152882 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70258193138 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2760919187 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.388888889 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384665179797 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12057578953 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156946573468 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273942692184 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145844605996 0.0645574589148 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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