Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In my point of view, I strongly agree with the idea that same amount of money should give to students’sports activities as to university libraries. Exercises like sports activities are important to students life. Sports activities make students be happy as well as healthy. Sport activities will be a culture for people of society. Also sport like football enriches team work skill.
Firstly, Sports activities in the universities make students happy. Sports are kind of exercises and when students participate in sport activities like football or tennis, they feel happy. Nowadays Scientist recommend people to exercise frequently. Because activities do not only bring delight but also protect human from many diseases like cancers and physical problems. In addition, many medical scientist believe that people can cure common diseases and health problems by exercising, playing sport. As you can see, sports activities are sort of medicine.
Secondly, by doing sports activities, It will be have cultural affect on the societies, since increasing Sports activities will cause to spend some of times in exercising and thus it will be in their part of lives and result in continuing sports activities in the future. For example, My older friends and I played sport often in the university stadium and this contnuies until now. This profitable habit have been in our culture.
Finally, Sports like football enrich team work skill. In the football sport, It is required to collaborate with members of team in order to win the game and students will experience and practice team work. This is another profit for young students since they will enter to the future job market which required team work competence.
In sum, I support the idea of spending same budget for sports activity as university library. Student will receive some benefits from sport activities, including happiness and physical health as well as team work skill enrichment. If you want to have healthy and communicative people for your society, support the budget increasing in sports activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30395136778 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79675231714 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8418394835 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272278834015 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942279911682 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938226541667 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160393645946 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778125663533 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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