Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Visiting museum is the best way to learn about a country.
Museums are the source that exhibits or showcase a country's historical achievements and maintains the heritage of a nation as well. They help in exposing the country's significance to another country. While some believe that museums do not have any importance as they consist of outdated information and unwanted monuments. However, other reiterate museums are the obvious way of disclosing the ancient and modern developments to posterity. Having observations made in a critical pattern, I would definitely opinionate that a country can be portrayed best through a museum.
In general, there is a huge scope to get to know about a place and its prosperity through this art exhibition. Many groundbreaking buildings, as well as the outbreak of many cultures that have taken place. Museum visit may lay the foundation for strengthening the inter nations relationships mutually bounding to the cultural heritage of the country. A compelling example for this is Salar Jung museum located at Hyderabad in India. It is one of the three national museums in India known for showcasing a plethora of ancient monuments, buildings, historic books, etc., this museum helps in endorsing the cultural heritage of our country to different parts of the country. As a result, the country's historic reputation can be burgeoned globally.
Furthermore, the museum helps the posterity to explore about the living style, traditions, epidemic conditions and culture, reign of kings, etc., of the ancient people in their country and this in return enhance the importance of a nation. So there is abundant information to be known by the future generations irrespective of age factor about their country. Either young or old anyone can obtain a good knowledge of a country visiting museum. Younger generations don’t even know the importance of historical places and their origin. So by taking them to educational trips to these museums, children have a scope to inoculate themselves with the information provided by the teachers. Eventually, the heritage and prosperity of the archaic times can be passed to further generations of a country. So museum plays a significant role in protecting the treasury and glory of a country leading to the unique promotion of a nation.
In conclusion, it must be said that visiting a museum is the best way of understanding a country. Therefore, by all the elements discussed in the aforementioned paragraphs, I would like to reiterate that a nation’s treasury, heritage, and prosperity can be safeguarded in the heart of museum which is really important to know much more about a country by the posterity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in general, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26128266033 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1097072933 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508313539192 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7311403077 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.05 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196324123469 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644881003116 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566030192763 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134775455257 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262081443905 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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