do you agree or disagree with the following statement
when classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project
There is no doubt that with development of technology the ways which people can communicate with each other has spread. But a controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether it is better for doing a project, coworkers keep in contact in person or by e-mail. Contrary to some people who believe, communicating by e-mail is more efficient, I assume that when colleagues interact with each others in person, the project will be done faster and more productive due to two reasons which will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is not hidden to anyone that when colleagues get to one another as a group to do a project, it is more likely to transmit their concepts and ideas to each other better. To be more specific, communicating by e-mail causes misunderstanding, so it may make the person confused. To illustrate my point, when I worked in a construction company, I had to accomplish a project with my colleagues, so we met each other in meeting room. we had various ideas which could explain to each other easily. Ultimately, the project was done well-organazed.
The second reason worthy of note is that, when all members of a group get to one another for doing a project, time is less likely to be wasted. What is more, when coworkers make contact with each other by e-mail, they should wait until their colleague reply the email. For instance, my classmates and I were supposed to solve the math problem. We communicated with each others by email. Not only we could not solve the problem, but also we missed a lot of time.
To recap, for two reasons which I mentioned, keep in contact with email causes either confusion and misunderstanding or wasting time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
..., so we met each other in meeting room. we had various ideas which could explain t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, second, so, well, as to, for instance, no doubt, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76510067114 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86767300939 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6279279861 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305082881804 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105876130825 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641242537704 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183235425747 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831945018583 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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