Nowadays people do not stop debating about whether doing the same work during the day makes workers more satisfied or having distinctive tasks all day long can do that. Although it seems plausible at first glimpse that workers have more sense of satisfaction when they do the similar tasks all day since it is more mindless to do that, I would counter this point of view due to some reasons. I will enlarge on what I mean in this essay.
First and foremost, doing the same work is really boring and can make workers dull people who are always tired mentally as well as physically. To be more exact, a research which was conducted at Tehran University demonstrates that our minds cannot stand all those similar tasks during the day. In that research, they interviewed with some workers of a big factory which produces cars and it reveals that workers often complain about doing the same old things every day. As a result, workers are not satisfied when they do similar tasks day after day.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that people need to be creative instinctively and it can affect on our health especially our memories if we do lots creative works. To clarify this point, when we do a number of unique tasks, we have to think about them, which means it is a kind of motivation for our mind to be active. In addition, imagination of doing dissimilar situation in which we can produce excellent goods is so exciting and let our mind do its work more perfectly. Consequently, workers will be more satisfied when they are healthier and produce superior product which will come true by doing unlike tasks.
Another subtle point which I should deem lies on the fact that by doing the similar works during the day, you are destroying your creativity and you won't be able to experience new things. However, when you do distinctive works during the day, you are busy practicing recently established works. In addition, it is more likely to find your way of life in those practices. As a result, it will be able to lead a happy life when much more money will be earned. In other words, the more money you will gain, the more delightful life you will have.
To sum up, based on aforementioned arguments explored in this essay, I am of the opinion that workers are more satisfied when they have unique kinds of works to do all day long.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...to be creative instinctively and it can affect on our health especially our memories if w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, really, so, well, i mean, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60238095238 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44661249453 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6203992229 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7058823529 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425660986802 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162656587527 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115208899266 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278694322758 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770272215633 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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