Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are more complex communities nowadays comparing to the last centuries. Role are altered extremely and it is difficult now to prioritize the activities. As a result of increase in population, there are more specified and diverse fields of activity in every levels of society. Although some poeple believe that young people do not give enough time to helping their communities and they spend most of their time and energy on them selves nowadays, in my opinion this is unfair to judge like this. There are some reasons for their involvement in society provided bellow.
First of all, young people are engaged in more activities rather than elders. They should study hard at colleges and universities and obtain as many skills as they can to be prepared for a job. Studing nowadays is more difficult than before as there are more fields one should pass to achieve a simple degree. Their study finally results in a suitable performance which is required by the communities. Even though their efforts are not directly affect the communities, they are essential in a whole society.
Second, as the consequences of the modern society, people should be very fast in their works. They are always short in time because of the long working hours, traffic jams and long distances. Therefore, the pretty small time they find will be allocated to their own plessure time but this does not mean that they do not help the communities. Charities are more active nowadays presenting people attendance in helping communities. For instance, a doctor may rarely find a free time to visit orphan kids, however, she sends some money every month to charities in order to take care of them.
In conclusion, as the life style has changed in a vast majority, young peoples' helping has changed comparing with past. They provide their aids via their indirect activities provided to the whole society or money donation through the charity activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
... spend most of their time and energy on them selves nowadays, in my opinion this is unfair ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99378881988 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59586462949 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1162099733 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216344978839 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648462468723 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633298547985 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136376247247 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618747350978 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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