Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? young people today have no inflience on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, participating young people in making decision has turned into a controversial issue during recent years as far as many governments have utilized young people in the federal works; actually, considering the fact that the youth are more up to date, policy makers prefer to recruit them in ministries; therefore, I opposed the claimed statement that has been expressed the fact that the future of a country isn't affected by youth. Although some of elders believe experience is much more significant than being energetic and up to date, researchers have proved that young educated groups gain more prosperity than older group by studying several arrangements of a corporation.
actually, in such a technological world, young people not only have a great effect on the vital sector s of society but they also have a considerable control over the ways of making decisions; moreover, Although the principles who are chosen in election are almost aged, the supporter employee often consist of recent graduated people. It is hard to ignore the fact that the youth weren't participated in crucial aspects of society as whole, nowadays, people are more informed about human's abilities whether old or young.
On the one hand, countries in order to be more welfare should exploit the youth energy specially in high-level positions. For better or worse the societies’ success directly depends on the numbers of enable people allocate to significant careers; actually the society members are at the mercy of the youth endeavors; on the other hand, regarding the fact that elders have been tired because of the pressure of their efforts, after retirement, the youth active human resource should be displaced.
Albeit, one cannot neglect the fact that a person who involve into a job can predict the results of a decision; furthermore, they extremely dominate the activities' and methods used for solving issues. in my view point, the composition of both old experimented and young capable people is the best arrangement of the center of vital decisions of a country; in other words, a number of individual young people who are leaded by an experimented people can accelerate the achieving of societies’ aims.
All in All, according to the average of investigation centers where reinforce principles to make decisions has declined during recent years, future of societies have influenced by the impacts of recent graduated people who are more up to date and more motivated to do their best; actually, the younger people who are recruited in companies, the more prosperity that can be gained; hence, the societies are inclined choosing trained and active people in order to be encountered nicer future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in fact, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88371539971 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542528735632 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.793878172 48.9658058833 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.0 100.406767564 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.3333333333 20.6045352989 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.45110844103 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176649741859 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747120251409 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436791369112 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103313227541 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297778532668 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 11.7677419355 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 58.1214874552 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.1575268817 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.01818996416 135% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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