Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars.Use examples and reasons to support your position.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars.
Use examples and reasons to support your position.

Submitted by aionex on Thu, 12/13/2018 - 12:09

class="although">although class="there">there are many people considering class="that">that the university education should be supplied to all interested scholars class="free">free, I class="have">have a different attitude toward this view. I class="think">think class="that">that class="it">it class="is">is not suitable for college education to charge nothing. class="there">there are several reasons for me to explain class="it">it.

First, the class="free">free university education may class="have">have poor quality because the college doesn't class="have">have class="enough">enough money to give salary to professors and class="maintain">maintain the class. For example, I was a college student in Taiwan. I class="have">have attended a speech class which was class="free">free for everyone. However, class="although">although the topic of the speech was so attracting, the professors invited were not so good. they talked something basic and not professional. Furthermore, the classroom was not tidy because class="there">there was no staff responsible for maintaining the room.

Second, if the college education was class="free">free, no student would cherish class="it">it. if every university student does not class="have">have to pay for class, they will quit the class easily because every student prefers to go outside for entertainment. take my classmates for example. everyone in my department had to pay for the biology class but class="it">it cost less. Even though every student definitely had to be charged for the class, several students chose to go to see the movie because class="it">it cost them less money.

Finally, if the university gets class="enough">enough money, higher quality of professors will be recruited so class="that">that overall teaching quality will be improved. take my college for example. The enrollment of my school increased last year so class="that">that the college recruited more professors who graduated from good universities. Actually , they taught well. We also enjoyed the contents they class="have">have taught us.

In conclusion, class="although">although many people consider class="it">it better not to charge for university education, I class="think">think class="it">it class="is">is wrong. class="it">it class="is">is good for every student to pay for high quality of teachers and classes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2520.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.07692307692 4.8611393121 166% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.50257410409 2.67179642975 318% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.51630824373 145% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.698022115 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0308132298671 0.236089414692 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0152029223218 0.076458572812 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0176293674779 0.0737576698707 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0263562112886 0.150856017488 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109696422348 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 11.7677419355 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.5 58.1214874552 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 28.99 10.9000537634 266% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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