Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
agree or disagree
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling has a tremendous impact on our life and well beings. It enhance our life in immeasurable ways because it encopass our core. Even though some people disagree with me, I agree that travelling inside the country has more advantage than travelling outside for two important reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First reason is that travelling inside the country has benefit on our economy. Indeed, most of the people couldn't able to travel due to huge expenses. Subsequently, if the people decided to travel inside the country, they will be able to cut this costs to the half or less. My experience is the better example for this, few years ago, when I got married, me and my husband wanted to travel in honey moon, but because we spend most of our saving in wedding expenses, we didn't have a lot. So, I asked my husband to travel to the country side and rent home in large open area rather that travelling a broad. He agreed with me. We saved by traveling by car rather that airplane and spent our honey moon in a great romantic house. Our saving money was compatible with this small expenses. This experience left me with strong believe that if I didn't make this suggestion of traveling locally, we would never be able to spend such amazing honey moon with this limited budget.
Second reason is that travelling domestically increase our appreciation to our country. If you want to know more about your country, you have to see all the important historical and developmental aspects. This knowledge will increase your belong and appreciation to the effort of your ancestors and people who build this beautiful country. For instance, I read article last year about best learning method used in the school. The author mentioned that one of the effective ways in learning is travelling to the historical and educational places domestically. He added that taking them to this site would demonstrate the importance of their country and made them more correlated with it. As you can see, If you spend time touring in your country, you will absolutely know the different amazing spheres in your country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82191780822 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59461457063 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52602739726 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4303194794 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6315789474 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247821228152 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841123009924 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642761221958 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178386490306 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280488166509 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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