Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Although life today is better than it used to be, human behavior is causing problems that will mean life in the
future is less comfortable.
There are many different aspects of human behavior that defines our culture and our species as a whole, there are
of course positive ones and some of them are negative. Problems in our life are specified from different points of view
some people fail because of their behavioral problems, some tend to ignore them and of course there are people who try to change the way they are. Moreover, i agree with this statement because of 2 main reasons which i will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, humans are the only known species that can choose the way it behaves, we can think, we can explore and analyze different aspects of our life. This is a distinct trait only displayed by us. This is why im implementing the idea that our future will be less comfortable if we dont analyze it right and don't change something in our lives.For example, if we look in our history, we can see that human's aggressive behavior was the case of many wars, including the most
tragic ones, even thought our life today is indeed better, we need to eradicate our desire for conflicts, especially for wars, or as a consequence we could lose everything we achieved to this point, this is why our behaviour should be more based on our society prosperity not on useless conflicts over borders.
Secondly, we could take this topic on a more close level, for example, i had a bad behavior in middle school and most of my colleagues were ignoring me, that had a serious effect on me, that i can observe right now, that little boy didn't think that in future he would become more anti-social because of his behavioral problems so learn from other people mistakes and most important learn from your own mistakes because it is important to emphasize that everything that looks minor now, will eventually cause major problems in our future and will make our future less comfortable.
In conclusion i can say that i agree that although life today is way better than it used to be, humanity and you as a your self should always look for ways to perfect behaviors and the way we treat ourselves and other people, because all those things are tied to our future in my opinion, and we should now ignore the fact that everything done has a effect even if you dont know it or notice it, this is why we should try to perfect ourselves at a maximum level possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59188544153 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42783530909 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496420047733 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.1344086022 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.208087986 48.9658058833 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.5 100.406767564 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.375 20.6045352989 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.45110844103 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195553846636 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867197619171 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524522971598 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946096380736 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335440763538 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 11.7677419355 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.1575268817 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.0537634409 227% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.