There are many values in human being relationships which have been respected by all people but undoubtedly truth is the most important issue between all persons. All individuals try to be honest or at least demonstrate they say truth in all communities because every body knows this factor is the most substantial concern of human connection. There are some reasons that show why honesty is the most crucial which have been explained in following.
Trust is one of the main elements in constructing relations in our modern societies and human being can trust to the other person when he or she sees the facts without any lie. People make linkage with each other in order to continue their communication in future and they can not count on liars for next months or years. For example in a business type the fundamental of all situations is trust which could be made by validity and the other aspects of relationships in this type have the second priority level.
furthermore, psychologists say human being becomes happy and relaxed when he or she discovers the environment is full of reality and truth. The importance and position of veractiy in our culture which is very common in all nations has been come from the chemical biological interactions of body and we naturally look for this popular value in order to be comfortable and calm. For example according to some experiments many researchers say their target audiences get stress automatically when they hear any untruthful statement.
In addition, when we make some relationship with the other people in fact we share many intellectual and real properties and for this reason we analyze our friends or colleagues to find out their characters in order to let them access our assets. Every person has a unique evaluation system in mind for ranking another person but the most weighted term is truth because the experiences taught our analysis would be more accurate when we focus on reality.
In conclusion, there are many models of connectivity including marriage, love, commercial, family and friendship but truthful is a mutual respected item in all of them and societies and religions in contribution with cultures have many lessons for our universe to show the vitality of fidelity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...type have the second priority level. furthermore, psychologists say human being becomes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, second, so, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82319136892 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53743315508 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7402836895 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.75 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113699975547 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475614487554 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287137465154 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649003569807 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261230495858 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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