Communication is significant and inseparable part of our life, hence it is important to inform another with information. In this regard, whether telling the truth or not depends on specific case. Some think that telling the truth is essential for whatever situations, some disagree with that idea. However, as far as I concerned, telling the truth is the most consideration in any relationship between people due to some reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, telling the truth creates the belief to others. As a matter of fact, belief is an abstract, fragile thing that takes a long time to build. However, telling the truth often is a good way to create belief. The listener believe in the speaker completely by the though they never lie or betray to them. More profoundly, the listener also responds to the speaker with honesty, kindness thanks to their feelings from the speaker. A good example for this is when I broke my mother’s favourite vase. At first, I was afraid of being punished after telling her the broken vase. Then, I decided to tell her the truth because of guilty feelings in my mind. Contradict to my though, she praised me on being brave to confess my mistake. This is a good lesson in creating relationship with people.
In addition, telling the truth is a good way to express one’s opinion. As a matter of fact, talking frankly to each other makes the relationship better because the listener and the speaker will sympathy to each other’s case. Indeed, while the speaker feels free because of expressing his opinion, the listener gets sympathy to the speaker because of putting their shoes in other’s case. Importantly, finding a solution to a problem or issue is faster by telling the truth. As the prior can know how destructive of a problem, they make decisions to solve them at fast rate. The veracity of this claim could be evaluated through a meticulous observation on the mass of evidences. For example, problems with peers in working is no longer rare nowadays. One of the best way to solve this problem is talking honestly to the boss, who may find the solution to improve the problems in working environment. By expressing their opinion, worker can make all effort to their job without caring others. Therefore, telling the truth benefit to the relationship between people.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that telling the truth is the most important part in any relationship between people. This is not only because its creation of belief to others but also a good way to express opinion. Therefore, there is no need for lying to each other in a relationship
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, hence, honestly, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88053097345 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74578112083 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484513274336 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2810871426 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7037037037 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7407407407 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.48148148148 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220951772107 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697687036503 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842564084927 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161472709682 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723062308324 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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