Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans are socializing creature and usually we cannot live alone. Socializing are part of our daily live and a person could not live by alone. Relationships are important part of our lives. Relationship does not mean love connection with someone; it could be our parents or could be our siblings. Relationship is important because our loved ones always support us in bad or good days. Our loved ones make us stronger to tackle any problems.
Any Relationship takes time and it is an emotional state burgeons over time and we burnish this feeling as we grow. For example, we make stronger our bond with our parents or with our siblings as we live together. No matter what happens our parents and our siblings always trust us and believe us. It is our responsible to never break that trust, and we can only bolster this emotion only by saying the truth. NO matter what happens we should always tell the truth to our family, truth could saves a lot of confusion and misunderstanding between families. For example if a boy did something bad due to some cause and hide or told a lie to his family, that could leads to lot of confusion and could slur his family’s reputation. Not only had the boy lost his families trust but also made his family shamed. If he said truth to his family, the family members could try to support him or it could be possible that his parents abstains him from doing something bad.
It is hard to trust someone in our first glance or in our first meeting. After our parents the most important and most influencing peoples are our friends. They are our partners in good and bad days. We barely hide something from them. To gain trust it took years and with our friend we spent time together and grow a friendship together.
We meet many peoples in our lives but all of them are not becoming our friends and with always friends we should always tell the truth to them. For next part of our live the most important ones are our loved ones, they are going to live their whole life with us they are our better halves. Maximum relationships are destroying because of a lie, as someone cheat with other one. Telling the truth is most important; it could hurt them but save their lives. Truth could save them from delusion and quarrels and they could live their own lives in their way.
Someone could argue that a lie is not lie if it saves a life, for examples hide some bad news from our elder ones as it could harm their health. By telling the lie we save lives. But I say that it is a cheating and it could hurt them if they informed from other source. I am totally agreed with the statement that in every relationship truth is most important. BY lying we could hurt someone’s trust and they could lost their respect for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...ll the truth to our family, truth could saves a lot of confusion and misunderstanding...
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Line 2, column 663, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...or told a lie to his family, that could leads to lot of confusion and could slur his ...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cheats'.
Suggestion: cheats
...destroying because of a lie, as someone cheat with other one. Telling the truth is mo...
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Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...urt someone's trust and they could lost their respect for us.
^^^^
Line 7, column 448, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d they could lost their respect for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4930417495 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39662666885 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.403578528827 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1227593844 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9310344828 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3448275862 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27586206897 5.45110844103 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155702003272 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05753285341 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577031389261 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101314883069 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286638527936 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.