In today's world speaking truth has become a myth. People are more comfortable in saying lies, doing so profits them. As far as I am concerned, saying truth is injurious as it causes lots of negative impacts in people. Lies or white lies are more preferable, which is generally followed in many business, saving people's life and in creating harmony between humans.
Most of the business policy is to attract the costumer, saying white lies benefits them as it creates the good impression to the people in buying theirs goods. People will be more attracted by theirs policies and they will agree in purchasing following company's goods. For example, in many advertisement we see that celebrity are doing ads and they deceive people with their white lies. People are mostly affected by theirs advertisement and buys theirs goods. Business are in bottom line by applying white-lies policy. Not only in business world but also in human life white lies are followed.
Additionally, White lies are Occasionally accepted in saving people life and motivating people to do better in future. Creating a false illusion in people while being unable to accept the truth is essential in helping people to retain their good health. For instance, my cousin had an accident and doctor told that he can never walk again in his foot. But instead of telling a truth, we told a white lie to his mother. Moreover, after a year my cousin was recovering in his health and his mom helped him to gain a good health, which clearly portray the advantage of saying lies. If we had told the truth than his mother would have lost her sense and would not be able to help him in his bad times. White lies are also accepted in human relation as it does in saving a life of patients.
Finally, harmony is important in any relationship, speaking white lies can help in obtaining accord in human's life. Human life is combination of sorrow and happiness. People are not perfect, they do mistakes accidentally or intentionally but they are in aware of not hampering their relationship with theirs beloved. In such situation people tends to speak white lies in saving relations and in having a good harmony with each other.
In conclusion, reveling a truth is not profitable. For maintaining a healthy environment in between the people white lies is necessary, it might be false but it is a good way in saving business, people life and their relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advertisement seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advertisements'.
Suggestion: many advertisements
...llowing companys goods. For example, in many advertisement we see that celebrity are doing ads and...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...life and motivating people to do better in future. Creating a false illusion in people wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83173076923 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64766822023 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9919402457 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3913043478 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982844208558 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352110935101 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270409885338 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688516859778 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222654772012 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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