Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
having plan is a crucial part of our life. As over time, by advancing technology everything around individuals have changed that it is very vital to acquire ability to manage them. some people believe that it is very important for youth to know and try to gain capability having plan so as to organize their tasks, while others hold an opposite view. In my opinion, all people, especially young person, have the ability to organize and plan for two noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that having schedule be given a peaceful sense to young people that cause them to go on their jobs well. brain of persons is very susceptible and need to preserve peace in order to work well. The best way is that individuals try to sort every their activities because brain can organize itself. Therefore, when people have plan for their task, they help their brain to employ all its capacities. For example, a few days ago, I read an article about those who had plan and who did not. they noticed that when individuals did not organize their plan, they were very anxious that cause their brain could not concentrate on any task. Consequently, lack of focus led people fail to do anything very well. Unfortunately, in severe cases some of them faced bad situation such as death because of lack of plan. However, those who planned for everything could follow their task due to the fact their calm cause their brain to relieve.
Another reason is that when young people have plan, they have priority for anything that help them to allocate appropriate time for doing every step excellent. time limitation is an essential problem that every person confront in this advancement world. if anybody have schedule for their works, they really face serious issue to carry out them. For instance, last year I wanted to take toefl exam for applying canadian university. I worked at insurance company full-time. At first, I had a lot of problems about how to manage my exam and my work, which really needed high focus because my task was very substantial. I tried to study at the same time working that cause me to not only make a serious mistake but also not having focus for memorizing any vocabularies. this event led me to be fired and missed my resource of income. Unluckily, I did not have any money for registering in toefl and forced to get rid of studding in order to find new job. if I had planned for my program, now I would have been in canadian university.
In conclusion, it is very vital for young generation to administer their tasks. Not only do they can pursue their work well, but also they can progress quickly. we all should, specifically youth, organize our jobs if we want to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69620253165 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48906168728 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5842136767 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6153846154 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255051017226 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078088092235 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545413701507 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166294713745 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618791146895 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.