Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Througout history youngsters and their issues have been important to both parents and society. Whenever youngsters performed well in society, then society advanced. Some people may take a view that young people have to improve their abilities to plan and organize in order to prepare themselve for modern life. However, some other may take an opposite point of view. I personally contend that, with complexibility of modern leaving and time being an important asset in our lives, youngsters have to develop outstanding planning and organizing skills to survive. In following paragraphs, two outstanding reasons will aptly illustrate my point of view.
First thing coming to mind is that, people can do their tasks much easier with good planning. For example, I remember when me and my friend sami were studying for the national master entry exam. We both started our study at the same time and we studied alongside of each other day by day. However, there was a huge difference between us two and that was our approach. As a habbit I always plann my study and other stuff from the begining to the end, however sami is a kind of person which do his job without hesitation and specific plan. So when the results came out we found out that sami did very poor job compare to me. In a study performed in michigan university it is found that planning for task could help people to achieve more success 54 percent more than people without any planning. Hence, thats why I believe planning will give peoples much better result result and everyone should know how to plan accurately.
Another equally important reason is by organizing and planning youngsters can beatifully find space and time for their new hobbies. FOr instance, I remember when I was in collegue, I had to attend all the classes and work in university cafeteria late nights. I always wanted to learn how to play piano and I was in struggle to find time to attend university piano classes. So i decided to look at my time table more intensievly at the begining of the new term in order to find quality time for the class. As I was familiar with planning ahead of time, I have changed my math class in the morning with the other class in afternoon and was able to take advantage of my morning hours, so I signed my name for piano class and also could use some other quality time. Therefore, Ability of planning and organizing will help people to make time for new things in their life and thats very important in modern lifestyle.
In short, all the aforementioned lead us to the conclusion that youngsters would get benefit from improving their ability to plan and organize and by these abilities they could relax a bit in this modern lifstyle. However, that was a story in a nutshell; there are some other reasons and examples, challenging the claim which is not mentioned above. All in all it is recommended that a survey be performed in order to investigate the effects of improvment of planning an orgaizing abilities in children from early ages.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2496.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75428571429 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5731394661 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 792.0 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1512268039 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.52173913 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8260869565 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211953896751 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612341212157 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576374560384 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129816280893 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295968056448 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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