A glance at people attitude toward organization brings to the light a question that has provoked a debate several times, namely, whether ability to plan is helpful in modern life or not. In my opinion, who has a very complicated lifestyle, nobody can become successful without efficient planning for his tasks and responsibilities. Although, some people may think that it is wasting time to write to do list or check the priorities, I believe that it is not true.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that we are surrounded with different kinds of duties and we are not able to to them all in one day. It is really essential to arrange our works based on their importance and finish them one by one. For example, I, as a graduate student and newly mother, must do a lot of assignments and pass final exams, while doing the laundry and washing the dishes or feeding my baby. To be honest, it is near impossible for me to successfully finish every thing in one day and I am trying to choose the most important one first and then continue to next step. On the other hand, I have limited energy and get tired soon. Therefore, without an excellent organization nobody can devote his time to main tasks and achieve his goals.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that, people tend to waste their time and participate in minor activities. For instance, they watch TV, while they have to wrap up their research papers or visit their manager. If individuals do not organize their time and manage the process of doing project, they would postpone it to future when is too late. Hence, it is crucial to draw a map and motivate ourselves to move forward.
Admittedly, sometimes we are not able to stick to plan and unpredictable situations happen on the way. Financial problems, divorce, having new baby or breaking up with a friend make us vulnerable and unable to track the plan. Nevertheless, I assert that if we look at our dreams, it motivates us to forget our difficulties and start again. Moreover, a study at Harvard University shows that people who know what they want to do or be in the future, solve their problems earlier and move on again. As a matter of fact, planning makes our complex life easier.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in previous statements, I strongly recommend people to make a plan to avoid chaos in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65801886792 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68989442086 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587264150943 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4248552928 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.947368421 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.89473684211 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193027665314 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522329240427 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348114771455 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100303700403 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337580840831 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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