Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Over the past few years, there has been a great deal of debate surroung the issue of whether or not it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. While some say that the ability of planning is not neccessary inn modern life, others, including myself, believe that in todays modern world, the ability of organizing and planning is so essential not only for young people, but also for all people.
One fairly important reason for this idea is that with having a planned and organized life, most people especially young person have an organized minded that help them to consider all effective aspects in their decisions. Moreover, with considering all aspects of a subject, they will not be regreted about their decision in their future lives.
Another important reason for this idea is that todays modern life is complicated enough and without an organized life, it will be changed to a hectic life that right planning is so complex. In order to overcome this issue, young people must have ability to plan and organize their life which is the reason of having a healthy minded. Besides, with having a healthy mind, people have a healthy life because they use their time in the best way that can be able to do all their necessary works and give a desire results.
Finally, some psychologists believe that the stress level of organized people is so less than unorganized ones. In other words, people with the ability to plan and organize, will plan for each level of their life and thus, they are more success rather than the others. Therefore, this ability of being successful in the society can reduce their stress and increase their self-confidence during their life.
To sum up, according to the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I am personally led to believe that because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize mainly due to social and psychological reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...at deal of debate surroung the issue of whether or not it is essential for young people to hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86094674556 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46038783132 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485207100592 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8832947629 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.363636364 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403191826375 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17576443755 0.076458572812 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967821586358 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255841445678 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833844720499 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.