Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, life is more complicated in compared with the past. We all agree on this. But when the details are mentioned, such as how to overcome the difficulties of the modern life, different comments are made. Some people believe that people should have ability to set plan. But others have negative attitude toward this. As far as I am concerned, prioritizing <span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> the tasks</span> is important factor to succeed in the today's life. To support my point of view, I have two reasons which are explained in the following paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind is that most of works are done by machine. Because of the improvement in technology, majority of countries' activities are done by computers, and there is deadline for most of works. If the work is not done on time, there will not be any special conditions. In the past, the individuals were responsible and so if you made a mistake, they could help you to solve the problems. For example, I forgot to enroll for the next semester on line, and the system was closed. I had to pay the punishment to be eligible for the next semester.
Furthermore, competition has increased these days. The awareness of people from different positions have increased. If you do not have plan, you will lose some positions. Take my brother as an example. He wants to apply to one of the prestigious universities. He had to get some degree to win the scholarship. He started to gather his documents in the last deadline. He could not prepare all records and unfortunately, he lost the position. If he had plan and prepared his documents on time, he would have been one of the prestigious universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 464, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...> is important factor to succeed in the todays life. To support my point of view, I ha...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the works') or simply say ''most works''.
Suggestion: most of the works; most works
...The first reason coming to mind is that most of works are done by machine. Because of the imp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the works') or simply say ''most works''.
Suggestion: most of the works; most works
...by computers, and there is deadline for most of works. If the work is not done on time, there...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ions have increased. If you do not have plan, you will lose some positions. Take my ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...get some degree to win the scholarship. He started to gather his documents in the ...
^^
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...her his documents in the last deadline. He could not prepare all records and unfor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84137931034 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08532062019 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2929955654 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8181818182 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1818181818 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208337687777 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513029565903 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538820598067 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125169006795 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548310763303 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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