Without the shodw of doubt, world has changed significantly during the history and at the past century it picked up the pace as a result of industrial revolution. Some people might say those who lived in the past were more happy. However, I personnaly think now a days life is more enjoyable. Among myriads reasons, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones, which persuaded me to put forward this idea.
First and foremost, the techonological advances during the past few decades influences the way people live at peresent time. In compare to the old times where individuals had limited access to medicins and curing a desease were like a nightmare, technology helps people now to live a more healthy life and in encounterment with a sickness, they can reac out to a doctor. For example, I remember my father had a heart attcat when he was at work around four years ago. His work was in one of the remote areas outside of the city. When he had the attack his coleagues just called emergency service and in ten minutes they were present at the seen without wasting any time the performed their basic tasks and just took my father to the hospital. If ot where the old time, there were no emergency service and even if it existed, the servise woul have been so slow that could not reach the place fast enough to perfome any thing and consequently I might have lost my father the my grandfather died because of the lack of emergency sevices.
The second reason one should take into account this significant that the life is much more exciting than it was before. In the past time people never new there existed a way for people to fly but now several instruments are invented to do so. For example, I love to fly. In the past there were nothing that human could do to fly and it was assumed that only birds can fly but in 2010 a person named Billy invented faboulos suit which can fly. This suit is called wing suit and people can go to a high point like a mountain an just jump without being worry about anything else. If it was the old times, It would have been only a wish but now flying is a reality.
The last but not the least reason is that in the past there were less jobs available than it is today and the ones which were available were all hard works. For example a Friend of mine whose name is Billy and is realy older than me once told me that in the past people mostly had to do farm works since it was the main source of income for families but now a days there are lots of big companies with a friendly enviroment that people can work. I myself am working in a company doing graphical modeling and as a result I am always conviniet in where I work.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that based upon the today's lifestyle people are more happy since life is more exciting and medical services are abundant. Actually there are some other reasons and examples advocated the claimwhich is not mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...more happy. However, I personnaly think now a days life is more enjoyable. Among myriads r...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...appy. However, I personnaly think now a days life is more enjoyable. Among myriads r...
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Line 3, column 914, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... reach the place fast enough to perfome any thing and consequently I might have lost my f...
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Line 3, column 969, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...onsequently I might have lost my father the my grandfather died because of the lack of...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ore exciting than it was before. In the past time people never new there existed a way fo...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... can go to a high point like a mountain an just jump without being worry about any...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun jobs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...t reason is that in the past there were less jobs available than it is today and the...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... main source of income for families but now a days there are lots of big companies with a ...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...n source of income for families but now a days there are lots of big companies with a ...
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Line 7, column 456, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...viroment that people can work. I myself am working in a company doing graphical mo...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...s to the conclusion that based upon the todays lifestyle people are more happy since l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2432.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 548.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43795620438 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36243331355 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3183912127 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.80952381 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0952380952 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244510528644 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064355079214 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564579295408 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130871740246 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335697570876 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.