Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without the shadow of doubt, friend makes a significant proportion of our life. Friends are whome we relay on in our predicaments and also have fun with in happiness. Making friend and strengthening bound with them is a cognetive ability which is important in one's life. I am highly diagree with the statement and prefer to be able to make friends more comparing to living with them for a long time. In the following I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons which persuaded me to put forward this idea.
First and foremost, being able to make new friend provides one with the benefit of socialization. The more the social realationships, the more the job opportunities. While being friend with a small group can limit these relations. My personal experience is a compelling example of this situation. I am a person with higher skills in making new friends as a result I am able to make contact with others and stabilish a bound with them. During the period when I was looking for a job I came into contact with many people some of which I became a friend with a peson named Billy. He was the manager of one of the biggest companies in Iran but at that time they had no position available. After a month he called me an told he have found a job for me only because we became friend and as a result I could find an ideal job.
Another point one should take to account this significant is life is made of different stages during which friends changes. So without the ability of making new friends one would end up alone. For example, I had many friends during my highschool whome I never met when I joined military service. During my service. which was around two years, I had made new friends but none of them I visited again after that period because we were frome different cities. Without being able to make new friends as on e stage of life passes one would loose at least some of his/her friends and in the end there will be left no friend to be with.
The last but not the least is, as people grow up, their needs would change as a result people with different abilities are needed to help a person. With having only some individuals as a friend one would be limited in this manner but making more friends can accomodate a person with more help. An instance of this is a child who only needs to play with his friends but as he/she grows up, his/her needs would broadened also. When becomes a juvenile needs to make a relationship and as an adult needs to marry. So a person needs a variety of friends to answer his/her needs.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples advocate the fact that making new friends is more important than keeping the old ones as new peopl can provide more job opportunities, prevent one to become alone, and answer to different needs of the person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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Suggestion: has
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, while, at least, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49902534113 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50655278531 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446393762183 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8540884022 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.32 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.52 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297619453387 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946042060773 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699709559165 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188974083676 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519136127323 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.