do you agree or disagree with following statement.
Childhood is the most happiest part of one's life.
Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion
Life has different meaning for different people.some may think achieving a great thing gives to meaning to their life,some may think possessing large wealth is meaning to their life. But the ultimate aim for all the people is to lead an happy life.Person may experiences many happiest times in his life span.But the most happiest moments are his childhood moments.Childhood is the most happiest time of one's life for many reasons.
Firstly childhood is the most happiest part of life as the child doesn't have any burdens.A child doesn't have any financial burdens, as he depends on his parents for his necessities.He need not bother of paying fees for his studies,purchasing clothes etc his parents will provide him all his necessities.Besides that a child doesn't need to bother about financing other people whereas as an adult have to be worrying about feeding and financing others.This freedom from burdens makes the child free of tensions.
Secondly, children doesn't have any family responsibilities unlike adults.Adults have the responsibilities of taking care of their parents.They have to provide proper medication and help for their parents. Adults also have responsibility of their children.They have to take care of children's education,manners,future.Further also need to take care of their relatives in order to maintain good relation.
Further more children have lot of plenty time.They spent their time by playing, relaxing,pursuing their interests.Additionally children are free from worries of job opportunities,future plans they can pursue or spend time in what they are interested.
In conclusion childhood is the most happiest part of one's life for above reasons.They don't have any financial burdens,depend on their parents for money.They don't have any family responsibilities and tensions. Further they have lot of plenty time to pursue their interests.Thus,Childhood is the most happiest moment of life as they are free from all clutches and can enjoy every moment of their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45806451613 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.86133748321 2.67179642975 145% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477419354839 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.295051705 48.9658058833 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.5 100.406767564 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.75 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 5.45110844103 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 5.5376344086 885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114276035838 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065332261636 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654540923817 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707819410763 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685003885951 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 11.7677419355 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.