Education is an important part of children's life .Today's with improving technology like internet ,online games , and cell phones and computer ,they can better educate .i believe that these technologies help children to learn better and easily.
Firstly internet and websites have lots of educationals programs and apps for education.there are lots of educational websites and online courses that really help students to learn more easliy .for example my younger sister has lots of problem with her English at school and she dont have time to courses .I find a website for her with the name of British Council ,it has lots of reading ,listening,writing ,speaking practices for practicing. So online websites can help children to learn better.
Secondly ,reserches show playing online games helps to have more active brain especilly for children because they have an active brain and without any troubles .It will be help to expand memory power ,for instanse there is a gamr with the name of Baghlava ,it is really good for children because there are some letters ,they should guess and find words .these cause to increased their vocabulary .And also there are many online games for learning and memorizing lesson for example english .
thirddly cellphones are a need for everyone even for children .they need to communicate with their classmates and teachers.they can aask question or have study groups online with them .for instanse my sister has a study group at night with her classmate for English lessons .they speak together in the group ask their questions .they have many platforms on their phones for doing their homewok ,cheking syllabus using of sources and etc.
in conclusion using cell phones ,playing video games and online web sites help children to have more resources for their studies and have improvemnet in minds ,also have many apps and websites for learning better their lessons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16828478964 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5540506857 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.1344086022 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.81350788 48.9658058833 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.166666667 100.406767564 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 20.6045352989 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 5.45110844103 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.5376344086 722% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15027161241 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967540273484 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020081225711 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099262161825 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197715995522 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 11.7677419355 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 58.1214874552 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.1575268817 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.0537634409 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.