do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
The success in whole life is the target for each person, all the people are aiming to be success in their life, especially, in their works, because being success in the job is the fundamental part of the succession in other things, if the person is doing good in his job, then, he would have a stable financial life and a stressless personal life, in order to do that , each one have to be professional in his career and would have a good social skills. In my opinion, a good social skill and the ability to relate to the people is the most important part to be successful, rather than studying hard in the school because these skills are the most preferring skills in the job markets today.
The ability and the tendency to make a good relationships with the people would open a lot of new opportunity windows to the work looking person, because when any job is opening, for sure they prefer someone they already know, as they said all the time it is not important what are you know but the most important who are you know. Some people insist on the important of studying hard in the school, they think the keep talking about the good social skills, is just a myth, nevertheless, in addition to studying hard, they have to improve their relation with their peers or their professors, in order to be successful in their career.So the wide relationship may give the person the job that he is dreaming of all his life.
The dealing with huge number of people would give the person great experiences in the life and help them to be more flexible in his relationship with different kinds of people personality, that in turn, makes him professional in his relation with his bosses and colleges, so he will be popular and lovable person in his work. As the recent newspaper mentioned, that the student whose spent most of their time in studying, in the future they would be struggling a lot in their social life inside the work community. Despite the advice from a lot of people to focus just on studying, each one has to focus more on his ability to deal with all kind of people, to be successful in the future the student have to divide his time between these two topics, social skills, and the academic work.
in sum, the success in life is not easy and it needs a lot of hard working, hard studying, hard working on the own personality, thus, the key point for the succession is the ability to know what the job market really want from the work looking person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, as to, in addition, kind of, talking about, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48106904232 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43935227185 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420935412027 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.1344086022 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1918060829 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 251.5 100.406767564 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.125 20.6045352989 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.625 5.45110844103 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272495009783 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133237644809 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519314733236 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180481623674 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368757210718 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 11.7677419355 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 31.56 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.0537634409 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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