Recently, there has been a debate about the benefits of replacing the gasoline fuel in the United State by ethanol fuel.
Recently, there has been a debate about the benefits of replacing the gasoline fuel in the United State by ethanol fuel. A group of scientists supports this idea which represented by the professor in the lecture, while another group argues these benefits as the author did in the text.
First of all, the professor argues the first point that has been raised by the author regarding the adding of the same amount of carbon dioxide by ethanol, as the gasoline did, by claiming that the amount of carbon dioxide which would be added to the atmosphere, would be consumed again by the new growing plants, to states it more clearly, the ethanol extract from plant, so to grow more plants they need carbon dioxide as a part of their growing process, so that will counteract the release of carbon dioxide from ethanol burning. indeed, by this point, the professor negates the first critic to the use of ethanol as fuel.
Second, the professor maintains the opposite side of view regarding the author concern about the reduce of animals food supplement, if the United State adopted the use of ethanol as a fuel, then, he explain the ability of produce the ethanol from Cellulose which is a part of the plant's cell wall, that the animal never used it as a food. Actually, the professor successfully cast the doubt about the reading passage assumption.
Finally, the lecturer contends that the ethanol would be able to compete in term of price with the gasoline, if the production of ethanol increase, in other word, if a lot of people will by the ethanol, the production will increase, then, the cost will drop, as a recent study said, that if the production of the ethanol will increase by three folds, the cost of production will drop 40%, in addition, the government support usually needed for any new product. So the author point will be practically unbelievable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...enefits as the author did in the text. First of all, the professor argues the f...
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Suggestion: Indeed
...of carbon dioxide from ethanol burning. indeed, by this point, the professor negates t...
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... critic to the use of ethanol as fuel. Second, the professor maintains the oppo...
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...view regarding the author concern about the reduce of animals food supplement, if the Unit...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'explains'.
Suggestion: explains
... the use of ethanol as a fuel, then, he explain the ability of produce the ethanol from...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'plants'' or 'plant's'?
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...l from Cellulose which is a part of the plants cell wall, that the animal never used i...
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Suggestion: food
... wall, that the animal never used it as a food. Actually, the professor successfully c...
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... about the reading passage assumption. Finally, the lecturer contends that the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 7.30242825607 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78881987578 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48227387228 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472049689441 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 21.2450331126 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.094083759 49.2860985944 353% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.75 110.228320801 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 21.698381199 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06452816374 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311785527195 0.272083759551 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192519354282 0.0996497079465 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.310101014396 0.0662205650399 468% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223837366116 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189574866456 0.0443174109184 428% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.3589403974 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.498013245 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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