Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are certain considerations and factors which everyone can take into account to examine and investigate people's opinion. I definitely believe that it is getting a secure job better than waiting more satisfying job. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. To substantiate my case, the following paragraphs will illustrate my reasons to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, reaching the maturation stage means that you should take slightly risky decision because you do not have for example enough experience that you will rely on it in some dreams positions or jobs. In other words, you have to stick with the first job chance simply to build your self. For instance, my cousin worked as a small employee in a big company, but today's he is the general manager for the same company. And in order to reach higher position you need to be very patient on your current status and try your best to be unique from the traditional thinking.
Furthermore, some families depend on one worker, that means waiting the satisfying job will lead to major economic problems and they will suffer from myriad problems. Moreover, waiting the best job means consume a lot of time. In other words, the time equal with gold. Hence, if they wast their time, it means you put your gold into trash. So, they should have conservative plan for their life if the satisfying job is their dream.
All in all, due to aforementioned ground, all folks should bear in their mind that they have to think seriously about their future carrier.And should take on consideration they have been become more independent and responsible. And should not joke with the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...nk seriously about their future carrier.And should take on consideration they have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89752650177 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59454447391 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9402856228 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330041701696 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100353039917 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680143439923 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177316506087 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326066310369 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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