It goes without saying that, we as Homo sapiens, live in an age when our lifestyle has undergone profound changes and became more complex. By this definition, monumental scientific and technological achievements have brought us relative convenience and make us familiar with new concepts. In fact, initially, people have a simple lifestyle and they just were following a constant routine which was remained from their ancestors. Whereas, all things have turned around, and our life gets more complicated which means more demands, complication, opportunity, excitement, stress and more success. The following essay takes an elaborating look at how we are facing with countless amounts of ways ensuing toward success in our present civilized life.
There is no denying that every day we come-across with new advancements that open up a new field for getting involve whit and satisfying ourselves intrinsically. Emerge of novel idea or sphere brought with itself wealth, success, reputation and chance. Undoubtedly, being a little creative and curious with the taste of endeavor is sufficient for becoming our ambitions into reality. Conversely, the chances were so restricted or even meager, because most of the people were agrarian and the others were a peasant. Therefore, the appearance of prosperous individuals was taken for many decades. However, nowadays between every breathing interval, we are a witness of a new millionaire or successful entrepreneur.
In addition, to being unique comparing your peers, in ancient time, it requires highly arduous work, while the form of attempts is mentally now. Admittedly, the arise of some advancements like computers, airplanes, vessels, automobiles, and cellphones have fueled the pace of achievement. If we have meticulous look over the inventions introduced from the past till now, we can found that it's rate has dramatically climbed up after the industrial revolution. In this regard, a group of scholars, at RMIT University have carried out an investigation to have a general overview of the feasibility and potential of being achieved over 5 past centuries. The results revealed that, by considering the time and population factors, the rate of inventions and wealthy peoples increased 189% and 900% respectively.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned materials we can reach a conclusive conclusion that we are living in a transiting era which is full of chances. I wholeheartedly believe that the humankind never will experience such markedly abundant luck toward being prospered by each sense he/she assumes.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else. (100207CN=081011NA) 76
- Some people like to work at home, while others prefer to work in the office. Which do you prefer and why 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of theirfamilies. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement, Professional athletes, such football and basketball player, do not deserve the high salaries that they are paid. 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...f attempts is mentally now. Admittedly, the arise of some advancements like computers, ai...
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Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'experience'.
Suggestion: will never experience
...oleheartedly believe that the humankind never will experience such markedly abundant luck toward bein...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prospered by each sense he/she assumes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4686716792 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10407655118 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65664160401 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.889186932 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.222222222 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802707937522 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247370011266 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236629513873 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417213494659 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030586020134 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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