Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Cars are one of the most popular mode of transportation in today's world. Having a car is a sign of prestige in our society. Personally, I do not agree with the statement because I do not believe that the number of cars will decrease in the next twenty years. I feel this way for three reasons, that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, cars are very comfortable modes of transportation as compared to other public modes of transportation such as buses, trains and metros. Cars provide with personal space and relaxed travelling. For this purpose, most of the people prefer owning a car for their comfort and privacy. It is the nature of human to seek for more luxury and ease in their daily life. This behavior of human will directly influence the production of more luxurious cars which will lead to more cars in use than there are today.
Secondly, population of the world is increasing daily at a very high rate. So, to fulfill their commuting needs more transportation tools must be introduced. Looking at the trend, they are more likely to get a car than use the public mode of transportation. Also, the advent of electric cars have largely attracted the public to use the transport based on renewable sources of energy (electricity). So we are more likely to see the increase of cars in use in future than today.
Moreover, the relationship between social status and cars is highly related in our society. Owning a car that is high in quality corresponds to high social status. As a result, people are attracted to the idea of having a car in order to maintain social status. This is eventually lead to dramatic increase in the population of car owning people as well as cars.
However, this might not be the same case in about a century because the cars would grow exponentially and there will not be enough roads and resources to accommodate then. But if we are talking about the next twenty years, there will be more cars than they are today due to preference of people in comfortable life style, linkage between social status and car and to accommodate the increasing population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, i feel, such as, talking about, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73045822102 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70397294604 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469002695418 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4978160371 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25092149103 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805696409644 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731805888561 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156285322711 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732734558369 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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