life is unpredictable and human beings have inclination to commit blunder very often in the amidst of flattery, allurements of worldly pleasure. Indeed consequences of bad decision can make one feel guilty and not left. with any other options. Awful decision can result in depression and jeopardizing life. To begin with it is prudent to predict positive and negative outcomes of any decision. Compelling example of this situation is my friend's tragic story. One of my friend was very much obsessed with wrestling. In spite of denial from all other family members, she desperately wanted to be a famous wrestler. However, all
of a sudden she was critically injured during fight. As a result of that she suffered from quadriplegia and lost all her abilities to perform activities of daily living. Unfortunately, she repented extremely for her decision and became victim
Of severe depression.If she would have choose decent career of engineer or business woman she would have prevented such devastating consequences. However, pitiful condition can be avoided by wisely estimating merits and demerits prior to coming to conclusion . On the other hand, one of my other friend used to stretch and work out to
Increase flexibility and strength before wrestling games. Due to this regular exercise regimen, she was one of the most successful wrestler in the history . . Second, sexually transmitted diseases and other air born infections are spreading malignantly everywhere. It is imperative to follow safety precautions to avoid contamination especially for the health care workers and people living below line. Moreover, increasing number of people suffering from diseases such as Acquired Immune deficiency syndrome is culprit in passing diseases to progeny. Apparently, it can hamper health of many generations in family as it is multi system affecting nervous system, organs and blood diseases and gradually bones and muscles loose their ability to function. Many people every year are losing their life due to terminal stage of AIDS. Even though, progression can be somewhat prevented with the use of modernized medications, but still in many cases dead is inevitable after few years. Thus, it is foolishness not to follow antiseptic precautions in health care field, better to prevent than cure. Hence, widespread education must be offered to the illiterate people to save many offsprings from deadly diseases. In contrast, clever people are safe because do not forget to use safety measures before involving in any contaminated procedures.
In a nutshell, after analyzing the prompt it is worth saying that one should forecast future results before taking any decision and to use sanitary methods in critical situations in order to be safe.
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 75
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- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 60
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 88
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Life
life is unpredictable and human beings have ...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ttery, allurements of worldly pleasure. Indeed consequences of bad decision can make o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
... can make one feel guilty and not left. with any other options. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and not left. with any other options. Awful decision can result in depression ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...and became victim Of severe depression.If she would have choose decent career of ...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
... Of severe depression.If she would have choose decent career of engineer or business w...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...d demerits prior to coming to conclusion . On the other hand, one of my other fri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oming to conclusion . On the other hand, one of my other friend used to stretch a...
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Suggestion: .
... most successful wrestler in the history . . ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st successful wrestler in the history . . ...
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Suggestion: .
...uccessful wrestler in the history . . ...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...essful wrestler in the history . . Second, sexually transmitted diseases an...
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Line 4, column 775, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...iseases and gradually bones and muscles loose their ability to function. Many people ...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and to use sanitary methods in critical situations in order to be safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, in contrast, such as, as a result, in many cases, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3441108545 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8868521776 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607390300231 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5489331286 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0416666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95833333333 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116303477941 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311764363725 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373222417242 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532327580391 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375273849024 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.