Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for the children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' job
While some people may hold a view that the best option for the children is that to follow their parents' jobs; however, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that the future jobs of children should differ from their parents' job. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherence to my outlook is that the children possess the different skills from their parents. It is explicit as a crystal that the individual's skill and craft are varied from others' abilities; even it differs from their parents' skills. According to the noteworthy, intelligent survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-nine percent of the children's abilities are differed from their parents' skills. In addition, they can illustrate the same function as their parents in the specific task. In this condition, the following of parents' career can lead to some failures; since the children cannot presents his or her parents abilities on that specific work. As a result, it is abortive idea to persuade the parents' job.
The second fact embraced my idea is that there is demand for wide range of career in the society. Indeed, in case which the kids persuade their parents ' career, some well-rooted jobs are established in the society, and the other jobs, which were not located in the parents' work list, will be neglected. In this situation, the society will rely on the other societies to be accountable of its population's requirement. This condition is not a proper for a society from its independency aspect. Based on the cogent statistic revealed by the Tabriz University, in the three decades ago, the Tabriz was relied on the Tehran for its fruit requirements; since the majority of focus was concentrated on the other fields. Moreover, this condition paved the path for vulnerability of Tabriz, because it was not independent.
However, some may assume that the children who follow their parents' career are more likely to be successful in their job; inasmuch as they inhere their parents' chasm experiences; actually they underestimate the importance of passion toward the job. In fact, if the children do not satisfy by their jobs, there is no guarantee that they will be successful even with their parents' proliferate experiences. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the issue is my brother's example. He was a very smart student, and he is talented in the mathematics. However, based on my father's job, he was obliged to become a doctor. As his career is not fit with its satisfaction, he is not as successful as it was assumed.
To wrap it up, based on the all aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the children should opt their job based on their desire instead of following their parents' jobs. Since there is variation among the children and parents' abilities, the society requires a broad list of career to be independent. Moreover, the opportunity for success in the job based on the desire is more than the followed job. All in all, I firmly recommend the choosing of career just based on the children’s desire and ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion:
...se which the kids persuade their parents career, some well-rooted jobs are establ...
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Suggestion:
...the children's desire and ability.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245065789474 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.144736842105 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0592105263158 0.0866891130778 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0460526315789 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0740131578947 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131578947368 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0345394736842 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80262592455 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0197368421053 0.0309702414327 64% => OK
Particles: 0.00164473684211 0.00188951952338 87% => OK
Determiners: 0.123355263158 0.0887237588012 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0230263157895 0.0209618222197 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00822368421053 0.0139019557991 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3254.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 543.0 408.028673835 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9926335175 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351749539595 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279926335175 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195211786372 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1197053407 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80262592455 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46408839779 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.7419835327 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.72 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5451182685 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.16 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.72 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.7126335175 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.55279503106 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44850752841 0.300154397459 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132255380331 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0796462753073 0.0752933317313 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.545649218772 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141534640662 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174240284985 0.114077575197 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091255877137 0.0781384742642 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.453603882419 0.336927656856 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0421134122675 0.067059652881 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33409139526 0.210909579961 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590989430393 0.0618886996521 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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