A controversy is raised about the type of job children should choose to enhance their careers. Some groups of people hold the view that children should choose a career different from their parents. However, some other groups may have an opposing view and feel that children should follow the path of their parents. From my vantage point, I concur with the latter group and firmly believe that a career similar to children's parents would make them more successful in their lives.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that children who follow their parent's path can earn more money. Growing an already established business is much easier than establishing a new business from scratch because of both logistic and financial reasons. A vivid example to shed light on what was elaborated above is the business that I inherited from my father, which is a pediatric clinic in the center of my home town. It is much easier for me to study pediatrics and retain all my clients, instead of studying internal medicine and look for new patients.
The second reason which is worth some thought is that I can receive help from my father upon traveling abroad. Many pediatricians are no capable of attending conferences because nobody can cover their place. However, because we are in the same clinic, we can share responsibilities. Ultimately, both of us can balance work with pleasure.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first cross my mind at a glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, another subtle point which is worth to be mentioned. The noteworthy, refreshing, intelligible study that was published in the American Journal of Pediatrics which revealed that physicians are less likely to make mistakes if they work as a team. The study was conducted in 120 centers in different parts of the US to prevent bias.
To wrap up, contemplating the above-mentioned reasons, one soon realizes that following the footsteps of parents is helpful to acheive success in life. Moreover, it enable the person to thrive in the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enables'?
Suggestion: enables
...o acheive success in life. Moreover, it enable the person to thrive in the community. ...
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Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the person to thrive in the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00579710145 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76491050465 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568115942029 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8094426591 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209850586684 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595546991124 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061016237955 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954119493296 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779585661302 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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