Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
When it come to the issue of it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one academic subject, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reason for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponent could provide us with strong purposes to support their thought. I believe that it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all. In my opinion, it is widely understood that it is a very extensive competition between people now. So, everyone need to have a broad knowledge in many subjects to obtain the position that he looking for. Also, for a prosperity future the person needs to be skillful in many things.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of the knowing in multi subjects importance is the rapid life that we are living in. If the person has the knowledge in different branches he can depends on himself. For instance, if the doctor know about technology he can depends on himself in repairing the simple problem that may happen to his mobile, computer, car and whatever he possess. By that he will save the time and the money which need to spend in the repairing center.
Finally it is a well-established fact that knowing in multi subjects help us to communicate with other. as much we learn that will increase our chance to make a new friendship. If our knowledge restricted in single subject we have nothing to talk about with people whom have different branches, that mean it will be hard for us to communicate with each other.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw a conclusion that says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people’s opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
When it come to the issue of it is better to have br...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad knowledge
...n people now. So, everyone need to have a broad knowledge in many subjects to obtain the position...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s the rapid life that we are living in. If the person has the knowledge in differe...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
... knowledge in different branches he can depends on himself. For instance, if the doctor...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...the doctor know about technology he can depends on himself in repairing the simple prob...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'possesses'.
Suggestion: possesses
...s mobile, computer, car and whatever he possess. By that he will save the time and the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ed to spend in the repairing center. Finally it is a well-established fact that know...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ects help us to communicate with other. as much we learn that will increase our ch...
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Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ects help us to communicate with other. as much we learn that will increase our ch...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200520833333 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.1640625 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09375 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.03125 0.046263068375 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0833333333333 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135416666667 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0260416666667 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58056155888 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0416666666667 0.0309702414327 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0911458333333 0.0887237588012 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.03125 0.0209618222197 149% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0234375 0.0139019557991 169% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2019.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76857142857 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248571428571 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58056155888 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522857142857 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.7970556648 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.875 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.774893833 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1875 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.644075263715 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 46.7321428571 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.29906542056 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465245678309 0.300154397459 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123262305128 0.103427244359 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0987087596826 0.0752933317313 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566254112048 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20177594772 0.151897553556 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178063199217 0.114077575197 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129319869575 0.0781384742642 166% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277462790456 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0791339245998 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273652614588 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140244651156 0.0618886996521 227% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.