Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern day people have varieties of means to observe information, such as television, internet, radio .. From all those information, some is relevant directly to their life, some is unlikely to affect to daily life. People argued that knowing about events happening around the world is important although they do not affect to people's life. In my opinion, I absolutely agree with this idea. I believe that this information both have benefit in present life and future life of people.
It is essential for people to have knowledge about the world around them, even it do not have any impact to them. Why do I say that? Imaging in daily chatting of people to their friends, their colleagues or their family, after talking about issue of themselves, people often talk about the outside world. This can be a new policy of government, an event in social or even some events in other countries. Of course, they do not affect in people's daily life, however, they are context of the chatting. You cannot take part in that chatting without any information about event which people are talking to. Here, I want to state that information of those events is a way help people communicate easier. What's more, in those talking, if you can show your knowledge about other event around the world, people will understand that you are not only good at specialize but also a broad knowing person. It helps you to increase your prestigious with other people. In general, knowing information about events around the world help you in your life and your work more than you think.
Additionally, information that in this period does not affect to you, but it can have impact to you on someday. For instance, information about a storm in the ocean. At the beginning, this storm is too far from land, so it has no impact with people. However, this storm can change its orientation accidentally and go straight to land. If people take care of this storm, they can know the information about new orientation and can prepare for this. More importantly, people can tell the information of the storm with other people, so many people can know about it. In basically, it is not true to say some information have no effect to daily life of one people. Today it is no essential, but tomorrow is not the same as.
Some people could say that spending time on information that is not important is time-consuming, but from my perspective, I believe that is just short sight of them. Knowing more and more knowledge help people to complete themselves and have more opportunities in the future life and jobs.
In conclusion, I want to repeat the important of knowing information about life around the world, even it is not affect our life. Nevertheless, people also should obverse thin information carefully because there are a lot of negative sources of information now. Accessing information but people must have creative choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...on, such as television, internet, radio .. From all those information, some is rel...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...television, internet, radio .. From all those information, some is relevant directly to their lif...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...mportant although they do not affect to peoples life. In my opinion, I absolutely agree...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...ge about the world around them, even it do not have any impact to them. Why do I s...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...other countries. Of course, they do not affect in peoples daily life, however, they are c...
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Line 2, column 700, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...s a way help people communicate easier. Whats more, in those talking, if you can show...
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Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...o daily life of one people. Today it is no essential, but tomorrow is not the same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, even so, for instance, in conclusion, in general, of course, such as, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84072580645 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66694869276 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433467741935 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3041142339 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282739299719 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905519211292 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913196144133 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164051860335 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101488524301 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.