Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
news are a crucial part of our society. As over time, by changing technology all people in every age face tons of different news from various ways that really can have impact whether good or bad on them. some people believe that individuals should know all circumstances that occur all over the world, even if it is not probably they will affect directly, while others hold an opposite view. In my opinion, people should follow those news which have direct influence on them for two noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that people who pursue all news every time may be suffered bad news and become anxious. A lot of news happen all days that some of them are bad while some are good. The majority of people take more attention on bad news that really have not do with them. Their brain become involve about these news for long time and also cause them not to sleep well. Therefore, all people should avoid to follow all news if they want to live without any tension. For example, my father who is very nervous watch diverse sort of resources news anywhere and anytime. A few days ago, when he saw a bad news about the war in Iraq, he really get anxious about ordinary citizens killed. this event had bad impact on his mind and also he could not sleep all the night. when he went to doctor who she was very good expertise, she banned him to follow any news in order to prevent harmful effect. As over time, fortunately, he had became health again.
another reason is when people follow only news that is really need to know, they can concentrate better on their life. Human's brain has limited ability at a specific time. if people deal with unrelated stuff such as unimportant news, their brain can not analyze essential tasks which they require for living better. For instance, my father again is a good example to illustrate this statement. he has worked at taxi station for ten years. he all the time follows all news about anythings with radio of his car. A few days ago, when he was going to another city and listened to radio, sudden he notice that in Africa people killed in rainfall. Unfortunately, his mind became preoccupation and cause him to accident with another car. if he had never took attention on dispense news, now he would have be live.
In conclusion, people should know only news that in fact have impact on them directly. Not only do they have good mood, but also they can focus on their life. We all should evade to follow all unimportant news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59731543624 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21824010482 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498881431767 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4655637629 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0384615385 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1923076923 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108296114826 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365351489623 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365180353964 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800653346548 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156698196632 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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