Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Some people do not think that it is important that to know about events happening around the world for events may not affect their daily life. Yet I do not think so for it is just unlikely. Events will finally affect our daily life even though it is hard to see at the beginning. And knowing about events not only a thing that keep us follow the news but also a good way for us to improve our ability of learning and thinking.
There are so many people like travel in the world. If the people who enjoy travel do not know about events happening around the world, they may meet some difficulties in the travel. Because they do not know why those two countries have conflicts. And they will not know what thing they did make natives angry. Not only for travel, but also for studying abroad, they may meet the same question for the same season.
There are also some people do not like to go out.They just like to stay at home. They only enjoy watching TV, playing games and relaxing on the bed. You may say those big events will not affect their daily life.Nevertheless, it is not for the simple reason that they can stay at home while they have steady salary. Steady salary is a meaning of steady country and steady finance. Big events will impress our country and the finance.
I really like to know about events for I can learn a lot about the changing of world. Then I will learn about what our country should do in the future. The I will follow our country's step, do something that make sense for our country.It is not only a good way to keep up in fashion, but also a good way for me to improve my capacity of thinking and analyzing.
That is why I think it is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect my daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nevertheless
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Suggestion: The; I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32640949555 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1719689924 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403560830861 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4181192428 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399504573345 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148012339513 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142392041093 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293448252594 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158392758 0.0645574589148 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.