Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The modern life offers people a lot of knowledge and we should use this expertise wisely. Personally, I think that it is crucial to be aware of what is going on around the globe. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First if all, it can help people to increase intellectually and socialize easily. When a person has wide ken, he could be interesting to talk with, and so he can make a lot of friends. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I enjoy reading the National Geographic magazine. I learn about other cultures, political and economic affairs from all around the world through this written source of knowledge. When I meet new people, I am capable of maintaining a conversation on barely any topic that they would like to talk about. As a result, I have established great relationships with a myriad of interesting people with different background and from different cultures. If I had not had such wide ken, I would not have been probably able to effortlessly make friends. That is why I am certain that citizens should get to know what is happening around them.
Secondly, when travelers know about political affairs that are happening in other parts of the planet, they can vacation safely. Through television programs and the Internet, the public can learn about conflicts in other counties and therefore, do not travel this direction. For instance, as I said above I read a magazine that describes not only environmental problems but also provides plenty of information about wars on the Earth. In this way, when I plan my vacation, I avoid taking a trip to destinations that can be dangerous. This is incredibly important for me since I always take my children with me on a trip. Although some individuals argue that watching to international news can be stressful, it helps travelers to ensure that their vacation will be safe for them and their families.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that general public should know about events that take place around the world. This is because it can help them to communicate with others, and secure their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82833787466 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81551961373 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.260618407 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.35 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142748010546 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423714179334 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369317155334 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919060185162 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221001568595 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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