Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The wheel of the life are going so fast in these days as many events take place in all over the world either economic, political,and technological events. the question is, do we need to be known of what is going around us even if had no direct effects on our daily life? I personally believe its required to be known of these events for many reasons even if some people opposite to my opinion and this for many reasons.
First of all, it will increase our knowledge and widen our perspectives so will can be effective member if discussion carry on around these events. Whenever news or events been announced around the worlds we can see the street will be talking about it next day and its good to share others discussion about these information. Trump announcement recently about stop the USA government from continue there works was the hottest news in USA and I never watching the news on TV so have no idea about it. but, after several days when we meet our friends at a restaurant they start discussion about it and i was shy to know nothing about it in contrast to my husband who's was a good speakers. That's why I feel it's important to be in touch with the events all over the world.
We can conclude also as we not live a lone in this world, it's important learn more about other cultures and how people deals with their daily life events. For instance, I always heard about Ghandi but no nothing about his political management or how his daughter became a president for India. My friends from India she invite me to meeting in her house in the national day for India. i feel emberersed when i can't participate as they spoke about the role of Mahatma Ghandi in their country specially his daughter and the newest events that taking place in India.
In sum, even some people believe its not important to know the recent events all over the worlds. I personally feel the opposite as it will enhance our information and our understanding for other cultures in all nations in the world,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, even so, for instance, i feel, in contrast, talking about, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50276243094 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45086011468 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508287292818 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9446815255 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194222618589 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748665816177 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039757174003 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121688170447 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181738403963 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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