Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding the issue whether the young people should care about the events happening around the world, different people hold divergent opinions. Some would maintain the standpoint that we don’t need to know about it because they won’t have impact on our daily life. I partly agree their notions. However, from my point of view, I attach great importance to our young people to care about the events happening around the world.
First, knowing about them can definitely improve our sense to the world and broaden our horizons. When we get exposed to the event happening around the world, one point we should make clear is that only the most important and valuable event can we encounter in our daily news. So they are extremely profound for us to know about it. The more you get involved in these events, the more you will become knowledgeable. Consider my own experience can shed some light on this issue. One day I saw a news that a super computer had been made that it can handle one trillion data and calculate them in just one second. After the shock of the first feeling, he got so curious about how it worked and whether it was possible for me to make. Although the answers turned out to be false, I got a number of knowledge about computer which benefit me in my future career.
Second, caring about the worldwide events is caring about yourself. As an saying goes: Everything who can exist is reasonable. Not only they are important but also it is likely to have some consequence on yourself. According to a survey, there are over 70 per cent of people claims that they come through the similar or even same issue broadcasted by media. From this perspective, it is vital for all of us to know about what is happening all over the world today. For example, if you saw a news that the economic depression is so likely to come just by this week. It is such a wise decision for you to sell out all your stocks on hand to minimize the money loose.
It is undeniable that someone insists that caring about the events happening in the world is a tired thing and it will take up you precious time to know it. But I think they will appreciate it after they get some benefit from this habit.
To sum up, whereas there is an argument for the unnecessary for caring about events happening worldwide, namely wasting time, broadening horizons, coupled with caring about yourself and avoiding further negative sequence on you makes a strong case for the importance for young people to know the events happening in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...some light on this issue. One day I saw a news that a super computer had been made tha...
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Line 3, column 783, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...e answers turned out to be false, I got a number of knowledge about computer which benefit me in my f...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ide events is caring about yourself. As an saying goes: Everything who can exist i...
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...he world today. For example, if you saw a news that the economic depression is so like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40137848951 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50332594235 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7679460897 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284988381751 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798586483779 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516162994277 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170437467025 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021446130972 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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