Lying to a friends is one of the most indispensable habits for every person in this world. It is a trait that we have been inheriting from our ancestors, according to a book named "Humans and their lies" written by renowned author Yival Noah Harari. Research also suggest that we learn such activities from our environment. I, personally believe that not lying to an acquaintance is next to impossible. I will provide three reasons in support of this by elaborating each one of them in the following paragraphs.
First of all, sometimes, friends lie to each other in order to make them happy. The concern they have for one another makes them lie. In other words, everyone experiences dispirited or disheartened situations in their life. Friends might lie, in good faith, in such situations to cheer them up. However, this type of consolation does fall under the umbrella of dishonesty. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Few years back, during the first month of my final year of college, we had various companies visiting our institution foe hiring students. As I knew this would happen, I had prepared very well. The placement process entails an exam, to shortlist students based on their score, followed by 2-3 interviews depending on the company.
There was a company named Apple that had visited during the first week of the placement drive. I was very confident of getting hired in august company. Even my friends were thinking the same. Although, I had topped the exam, I did not get the job. Consequently, in order to bring me out of this utter dismay my friends had lied to me that I deserved better. Consequently, they had told many stories, to cheer me up and to make me determined to appear for the placement process offered by other companies. This is a case where friends make you believe platitude even though they are plain white lies.
Secondly, friends also lie to each other due to pressure they receive from environment. Everyone has lied to their friends one time or other due to avoid homily from their parents. When a friend asks you for a night out, spend some more time with friends than stipulated by the parents, etc., These lies are relatively little in magnitude nonetheless fall into the category of dishonesty. Another similar example is when a friend keeps his dating life secret. Even not disclosing some matter or revealing this information to few in the groups can be marked as dishonesty.
Finally, all the above mentioned contexts are harmless when executed. But there are cases where friends lie in bad faith. Such people appear friendly from appearance but they wish for our fallout. These hypocrites may deliberately lie to see our downfall. Being self-seeking also comes in this category. While the two-faced friendship might not last long but the other harmless types, as in case of consolation or mollifying a person, makes the bond more stronger.
In conclusion, it is impossible to be completely honest to a friend. Most of people in this world, might have lied to his friend at least once throughout his lifetime. The very task of being honest all the time itself is so hard that the idea of conceiving such thing is considered far-fetched. But the degree and purpose of lies defines the friendship in a positive or negative way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
Lying to a friends is one of the most indispensable habits...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...out of this utter dismay my friends had lied to me that I deserved better. Consequen...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... friends had lied to me that I deserved better. Consequently, they had told many stori...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
... receive from environment. Everyone has lied to their friends one time or other due ...
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Line 7, column 523, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...me matter or revealing this information to few in the groups can be marked as dish...
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Line 9, column 451, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
... or mollifying a person, makes the bond more stronger. In conclusion, it is impossible to...
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Line 11, column 70, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...le to be completely honest to a friend. Most of people in this world, might have lied to his f...
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Line 11, column 111, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...ost of people in this world, might have lied to his friend at least once throughout ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2758.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 564.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89007092199 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73280504782 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524822695035 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 850.5 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5000823044 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6111111111 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0565355457396 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016925537064 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387232393035 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349224165983 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273328646149 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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